deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download File
HTML, 527 bytes
more ▶

More from ~DragonsDwelling

Featured in Groups:

Details

October 15, 2011
527 bytes
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 156
Favourites: 1,521 [who?]

Views: 22,180 (0 today)
Downloads: 322 (0 today)
[x]


it trembles, a
crooked form caught
in a black sea,
its surface
stagnant now – the
still waters rumble
with the passing of cars and
unmoving eyes, casting deep
shadows over its
small
broken body

alone and
weary

it croaks, a feathery wing outstretched,
reaching
a mouth, wide open

unable to utter a single
cry
:icondragonsdwelling:

First time writing poetry in a little over a year.
It's been awhile.


I plan to make this visual later on, but yah.

EDIT: So apparently this hit front page, on Popular - 8 hours. (I was wondering where all these favs were coming from, haha.) Thank you for the support, guys~

Also, sorry for making this rather depressing, haha..

EDIT 2: Front page 24 hours? Holy. @_@
EDIT 3: Front page 3 days;aldkfjksdlf.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconoragamithoughts:
~OragamiThoughts Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the imagery
Reply
:iconpuzzledpixel:
~puzzledpixel Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the image and the imagery. we salute yoo.
Reply
:iconnokhsa:
This is an incredible idea; I would have loved to write about this! (don't worry, though, i won't knowing you have)

You've executed it very nicely, on top of that. Extremely powerful and quiet. Very nice. Better than most any of the other stuff I've read here, and I've read a lot of new works and popular works.
Reply
:icondragonsdwelling:
Hehe, well, you could always approach the same theme another way. x)
But anyway, thank you!
Reply
:iconnokhsa:
I also wanted to add how I love that this could definitely take place in reality, including all the details.
Reply
:iconrandomise42:
~randomise42 Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!!! :hug: Thats amazing and so tragic, you've written it so well :heart:
Reply
:iconxxsilverechoxx:
~xxSilverEchoxx Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is the picture yours? Either way, can you send me a link to it if you have one, please? :) And love the poem, by the way.
Reply
:icondragonsdwelling:
Actually, yes. A doodle, but mine all the same, haha.
I don't really have a link to it apart from the one here though... may I ask what you need it for? I'm just curious. xD

And thank you~
Reply
:iconxxsilverechoxx:
~xxSilverEchoxx Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I actually wanted to use it as a desktop wallpaper, if it would be okay with you. It's very pretty. :)

And you're very welcome!
Reply
Add a Comment: